Tuesday, March 31, 2009

My Most Feared Critique

Fraudulent,
self-involved and contrived.
Undeserving and meritless,
a sentimentality that reeks of inexperience.
Writes as if trying to keep a reputation 
she has yet to earn.

Lacking nuance.

Aches with predictibility.

Afraid to get messy, dirty, covered, stumbled upon.
One-dimentional characterizations fail,
are pretentious
purely without risk.



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